SELF EVALUATION

1) What score do you think you deserve? Here is the rubric:

2 points - The first draft is thoughtful and a good start to an effective persuasive essay. It demonstrates an understanding of the classical argument.

1 point - The student completes a first draft that demonstrates an understanding of the classical argument

0 points - The first draft is inadequate

I think I should deserve 2 points, because my first draft is well organized and has all the necessary parts. It proves that I understand what the classical argument is.



 2) What did you do well?
I wrote strong and persuasive introduction part. It is a good job, because it means I could grab an attention from readers at start of my essay.

3) What could you have done better?

I think I could have done better at refutation part. I should have refured not only Ken Robinson's idea but also others.

4) Which part of the classical argument did you use the best?

I used narration part the best, because  I clear the meaning of the term, creativity. Also, I explained the relation between education and creativity well.

5) Which part of the classical argument did you use the most poorly?

I think.. the confirmation part is lacked of convincing.

6) What's your strategy to make your second draft better?

Certainly, the grammar!!